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Q: Agree or disagree: Multinational corporations have become too powerful

I agree with this idea for the following two reasons.

First, some companies exploit local people and work too hard. According to news, workers from developing countries seek for their job no matter how cheap their wages are. As a result, some companies hire them low wage, long working hours, and under poor environment. In addition, they negotiate the local suppliers to let the cost be lower. This is unfavorable to the suppliers because they lose their proper benefits. Indeed, the companies make opportunities to give silvering light to developing countries. However, they abuse their powerful authorities to the local people.

Second, they have the possibility to threaten the local environment. Nowadays, there is a growing awareness of eco-consciousness behaviors, thus many companies try to establish their own rules. However, sadly, there are still some companies that pursuit only their own profits. The more the companies have power, the more the damage they give to the environment will increase when it comes to the multinational company. Therefore, some third party should monitor the rule strictly and access the effects before it advance to other countries.

In conclusion, I believe that multinational corporations have become too powerful in this era.
听起来自然吗?
A: × First, some companies exploit local people and work too hard.
✓ First, some companies exploit local people and force them to work too hard.

× According to news, workers from developing countries seek for their job no matter how cheap their wages are.
✓ According to news reports, workers from developing countries seek a job no matter how low the wages are.

× As a result, some companies hire them low wage, long working hours, and under poor environment.
✓ As a result, some companies hire them at a low wage, with long working hours and a poor work environment.

× In addition, they negotiate the local suppliers to let the cost be lower.
✓ In addition, they negotiate with the local companies to pay them less for supplies.

× This is unfavorable to the suppliers because they lose their proper benefits.
✓ This is unfavorable to the suppliers because they lose their reasonable profits.

× Indeed, the companies make opportunities to give silvering light to developing countries.
✓ Indeed, the companies make opportunities to give (silvering light: This must be a translation error. I don't understand). to developing countries.

You can try: Indeed, these companies can provide wonderful opportunities to developing countries.

× However, they abuse their powerful authorities to the local people.
✓ However, instead they can abuse the local people with their power.

× Second, they have the possibility to threaten the local environment.
✓ Second, they can threaten the local environment.

× However, sadly, there are still some companies that pursuit only their own profits.
✓ However, sadly, there are still some companies that pursue only their own profits.

× The more the companies have power, the more the damage they give to the environment will increase when it comes to the multinational company.
✓ The more power the companies have, the more the damage they can cause to the environment, and this problem can be worse when it comes to the multinational company.

× Therefore, some third party should monitor the rule strictly and access the effects before it advance to other countries.
✓ Therefore, some third party should monitor the rules and behaviors strictly and assess the effects of company policies before the company moves on to other countries.

Sometimes I had to add length to what you wrote so it was clear what you were trying to say.

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