人間はある場所から他の場所まで行くのに、できる限り短い時間で移動しようとする傾向があります。
Human tend to move to other place in time as short as possible .
听起来自然吗？

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Your clauses are confusing, and without the Japanese, I don't think I would have understood your sentence. For example, other place in time sounds like time travel or science fiction. Punctuation would help. Humans tend to move, in time as short as possible, to other places. But this still sounds odd, moving is usually used for dancing or 引っ越し. You can use it this way, but it sounds strange in your sentence. Maybe
People tend to move quickly to get from one place to another. Not an exact translation, but much more natural in English. I hope this helps. :)