Hey I tried to write a review (b2 but I feel my level is so poor;-;) , can anyone help me and correct it and tell me if I can tell something in other way much natural?

1.Mss Peregrine's home for peculiar children is a dark fantasy thrilogy.It's novel that combines perfectly terror, mystery, fantasy and romance, which makes it be such a original history. This is the first book that came out and the first debut of Romson Riggs. Next book will come out next september. Last year Tim Burton, a filmaker and director really talented who has made many films fantasy and horror genres, after get fascinated about this book decided turned out this book in to a movie.However the film didnt get a very good feedbacks. 听起来自然吗？