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Is it okay say '' I want to stop staying up late''
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Is it okay say '' I want to stop staying up late''
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2021年9月11日
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- 英语 (美国)
- 西班牙语 (智利)
@e68a34b1 hi, are there any mistakes here?
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I'm going to talk about my trip to *** from my home. I mean, how can I get to *** from my home.
So, let's get started.
First of all, I go out from my house and walk to the bus stop. I live near Cesar Canevaro Avenue, so it's not hard. I get on a bus and get off on Los Heroes Avenue. Secondly, I go to train station and get on a train. It takes around 20 minutes to arrive on Aviación Avenue with Javier Prado Avenue. After that, I have to get on a bus again. This trip part takes more time around 30 or 40 minutes, depending on traffic. Then, I get off on Faucett Avenue and once again catch a bus to Ovalo La Perla. Finally, I walk along Juan Pablo Avenue and I came *****.
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I'm going to talk about my trip to *** from my home. I mean, how can I get to *** from my home.
So, let's get started.
First of all, I go out from my house and walk to the bus stop. I live near Cesar Canevaro Avenue, so it's not hard. I get on a bus and get off on Los Heroes Avenue. Secondly, I go to train station and get on a train. It takes around 20 minutes to arrive on Aviación Avenue with Javier Prado Avenue. After that, I have to get on a bus again. This trip part takes more time around 30 or 40 minutes, depending on traffic. Then, I get off on Faucett Avenue and once again catch a bus to Ovalo La Perla. Finally, I walk along Juan Pablo Avenue and I came *****.
- 英语 (美国)
@moonie1 I'm going to talk about my trip to *** from my home. I mean, how I get to *** from my home.
So, let's get started.
First, I walk from my house to the Cesar Canevaro bus stop. I live nearby, so it's not hard. I get on a bus and get off on Los Heroes Ave. Then I take a train about 20 minutes to Aviación Ave & Javier Prado Ave. After that, I take another bus for around 30 or 40 minutes, depending on traffic where I get off on Faucett Ave. After that I catch my last bus to Ovalo La Perla. Finally, I walk along Juan Pablo Ave and I have arrived.
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- 西班牙语 (智利)
@e68a34b1 thank you.
there are many mistakes TT. My bad
there are many mistakes TT. My bad
- 西班牙语 (智利)
Is it okay to say 'in addition, this part takes more time depending on the heavy traffic'? @e68a34b1
Is it okay to say 'in addition, this part takes more time depending on the heavy traffic'? @e68a34b1
- 英语 (美国)
@moonie1 yeah, that’s fine.
They weren’t mistakes, just some of the grammar was strange or the sentences sounded very formal (stiff)
I just corrected the way you worded it so it didn’t sound so formal & instead changed it to flow more like how you’d say it in a conversation.
If you are writing a school essay or something you can keep it like you originally wrote it.
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