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monica8
2017年4月25日

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Because the nursing insurance law has been implemented, fund from pool of insurance premium was re-distributed to welfare services such as visiting cares and senior care welfare facilities. 听起来自然吗？

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monica8
2017年4月25日

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Thank you for voting. Would you please correct my sentences.
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OliviaMarie
2017年4月25日

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有一点不自然

Just a little suggestion:

Because the nursing insurance law has been implemented *funds* from *the insurance premium pool were* re-distributed to welfare services.... (everything else is fine)

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rickssg
2017年4月25日

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有一点不自然

This is better: Because the nursing insurance law has been implemented, funds from the pool of insurance premiums were re-distributed to welfare services, such as care visits and senior care welfare facilities.

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