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Eduardoakaedu
2017年5月9日

  • 葡萄牙语 (巴西)
  • 英语 (美国)
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I traded in my Xbox one for my friend's PS4, and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.

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I traded in my Xbox one plus $50 for my friend's PS4. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.

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I exchanged my Xbox one for my friend's PS4 and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included. 听起来自然吗？

Which sentence is correct? Can you make it sound more natural?
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marinaholden94
2017年5月9日

  • 英语 (美国)

自然

Your second entry sounds much more natural than the others to me.

Eduardoakaedu
2017年5月9日

  • 葡萄牙语 (巴西)
@marinaholden94 Is there a more natural way of saying that sentence? Thanks for helping me.
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Paradox886
2017年5月9日

  • 英语 (美国)

自然

They all sound really good to me. I'd probably use "seal the deal" instead of "close" but that's mostly personal preference.

marinaholden94
2017年5月9日

  • 英语 (美国)

自然

@Eduardoakaedu Maybe try this
" I traded my Xbox One to my friend and payed them an additional $50 for their PS4. I got the PS4 for a good deal, because it is new and it came with two games."

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